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aap kay liay Regular Buddy

 Number of posts: 128 Age: 34 Job/hobbies: media Reputation: 0 Points: 1377 Registration date: 2008-08-15
 | Subject: wo laRki phool jesi hy Tue Aug 26, 2008 12:08 pm | |
| (main apni ye poem phoolon ki tara nazuk, phoolon ki tara khoobsoorat, phoolon ki tara maasoom, aur phoolon ki tara muhattar ,"Sana hussain" k naam kerta hooN :flower: ) wo laRki phool jesi hy .......................bhut shaadaaN,bhut dilkash ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,bhut naazuk,bhut komal wo laRki phool jesi hy .....................use paakeeza nazrooN se ....................hamesha maiN ne dekha hy ....................use paakeeza suchoN maiN ....................hamesha maiN ne socha hy wo laRki phool jesi hy ...................use maiN jab bhi dekhoN tu ....................qasam se apni palkiN bhi ...................jhapakna bhool jata wo laRki phool jesi hy ..................use dekha hy maiN ne per ...................bhut muhtaat nazrooN se ..................maiN derta hooN kahiN us ko ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,nazar meri na lag jai wo laRki phool jesi hy .................kay us ka mar,mareeN nazuk saraapa ................sar se paa tak apni khushboo se mehakta hy wo laRki phool jesi hy ................kay us kay paass jane se .................meri her saans bheeni bheeni ...............khushboo se mehakti hy wo laRki phool jesi hy .................use choone se darta hooN ................gulaabi rung choone se .................kahiN melaa na ho jai wo laRki phool jesi hy ...................zara socho,zara boojho ..................wo laRki kon he socho .................wo laRki kon hy boojho ............................................. chalo maiN khud bata deta hooN us laRki kay baare maiN wo laRki aap ho alla wo laRki aap ho alla.
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baychain AM Cool Buddy

 Number of posts: 5116 Age: 20 Location: QUETTA the city of changing weathers Humor: life us nothing without it Job/hobbies: reading books,article writing,music,net using Reputation: 0 Points: 1391 Registration date: 2008-07-25
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Tue Aug 26, 2008 12:11 pm | |
| thankx dear this poem is superb mindblowing gorgous great so nice marvelous bravo meray pass alfaz bhi nahi believe me this is my fav 4rm now |
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@thra.l3utt Moderator

 Number of posts: 2882 Age: 25 Location: Sialkot Job/hobbies: Old Songs Reputation: 0 Points: 1564 Registration date: 2008-02-04
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Wed Aug 27, 2008 5:38 am | |
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Smart Aleck Admin

 Number of posts: 6669 Age: 36 Location: Karachi Humor: Call: 0321-234-7005 Job/hobbies: Business Consultant Reputation: 17 Points: 4816 Registration date: 2008-01-16
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Wed Aug 27, 2008 6:00 am | |
| Bohat acha khayal paish kiya hay... Bohat aala  _________________ http://www.facebook.com/wow.wahab
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heartbreakking AM Cool Buddy

 Number of posts: 1820 Age: 28 Location: QUETTA Humor: Which makes me smile Job/hobbies: Lecturer (Physics) Reputation: 2 Points: 1744 Registration date: 2008-01-21
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Thu Aug 28, 2008 6:58 am | |
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heartbreakking AM Cool Buddy

 Number of posts: 1820 Age: 28 Location: QUETTA Humor: Which makes me smile Job/hobbies: Lecturer (Physics) Reputation: 2 Points: 1744 Registration date: 2008-01-21
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Thu Aug 28, 2008 7:03 am | |
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najma Moderator

 Number of posts: 3795 Age: 29 Location: Allah ki zameen Job/hobbies: poetry'music'movies'gardening Reputation: 17 Points: 4285 Registration date: 2008-01-19
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Fri Aug 29, 2008 7:33 am | |
| waqye bohat ache alfaz mein tareef ki hai' aap ki pakeeza soach 'mein dhali yeh poem zabardast hai |
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Anoosh Tariq AM Cool Buddy

 Number of posts: 5167 Age: 31 Location: Karachi, Pakistan Job/hobbies: Graphic Designer Reputation: 0 Points: 1602 Registration date: 2008-01-17
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Fri Aug 29, 2008 10:11 pm | |
| Out standing ............ |
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baychain AM Cool Buddy

 Number of posts: 5116 Age: 20 Location: QUETTA the city of changing weathers Humor: life us nothing without it Job/hobbies: reading books,article writing,music,net using Reputation: 0 Points: 1391 Registration date: 2008-07-25
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Sat Aug 30, 2008 10:41 am | |
| ya aur humain issi tarha ki poems ka intizar rahay ga |
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ghazanfarAli AM Star

 Number of posts: 374 Age: 29 Job/hobbies: no Reputation: 0 Points: 1368 Registration date: 2008-08-20
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Sun Aug 31, 2008 4:28 am | |
| wow yarr wakee app poet ho wakee lash hai excellent dear. |
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aap kay liay Regular Buddy

 Number of posts: 128 Age: 34 Job/hobbies: media Reputation: 0 Points: 1377 Registration date: 2008-08-15
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:05 am | |
| | baychain wrote: | thankx dear this poem is superb mindblowing gorgous great so nice marvelous bravo meray pass alfaz bhi nahi believe me this is my fav 4rm now |
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx churail  |
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aap kay liay Regular Buddy

 Number of posts: 128 Age: 34 Job/hobbies: media Reputation: 0 Points: 1377 Registration date: 2008-08-15
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:10 am | |
| | @thra.l3utt wrote: | | superbbbbbbbbbbbb |
thanx |
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aap kay liay Regular Buddy

 Number of posts: 128 Age: 34 Job/hobbies: media Reputation: 0 Points: 1377 Registration date: 2008-08-15
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Fri Sep 05, 2008 8:02 am | |
| | Smart Aleck wrote: | Bohat acha khayal paish kiya hay... Bohat aala  |
bhut shukria janab e man |
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aap kay liay Regular Buddy

 Number of posts: 128 Age: 34 Job/hobbies: media Reputation: 0 Points: 1377 Registration date: 2008-08-15
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Fri Sep 05, 2008 8:02 am | |
| | heartbreakking wrote: | | nice |
thankssssssss |
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aap kay liay Regular Buddy

 Number of posts: 128 Age: 34 Job/hobbies: media Reputation: 0 Points: 1377 Registration date: 2008-08-15
 | Subject: Re: wo laRki phool jesi hy Fri Sep 05, 2008 8:03 am | |
| | najma wrote: | | waqye bohat ache alfaz mein tareef ki hai' aap ki pakeeza soach 'mein dhali yeh poem zabardast hai |
bhut bhut shukria |
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